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i feel like depending on if her paranoia here is justified or not what comes next will bring into focus a lot about dana's character since a lot of the heavy feelings in this chapter are confined to dana's narrative pov rather than empirically existing in the text. both outcomes'll be equally interesting so i'm excited either way!
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over/under in this not being foreboding at all but actually a catharsis anticlimax. mary and lenore enter the bar and dave and dare are just fucking bawling into each other's arms like a pair of weenies drunk out of their minds but otherwise completely unharmed and not at risk. either that or unfathomable horrors i guess.
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you know thinking about it we got a very fractured june in the wake of something traumatic getting wasted with a strilonde at an inopportune moment..the parallels don't stop from keep happening. juju candy versus dubious alien alcohol.
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risk is good. this conversation is good. everything going on here is really good stuff
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heartwarming news! the entire plural system is so saddled with trauma that the "leave a headmate to front for a while to let you process" approach is crashing and burning from the starting line!
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i have great news for you about how bodyspace also works albeit on a longer timescale, dare.
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third person pov as indication of dissociation rules as a narrative technique actually
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gonna be real i don't think mary really even cracks the top five list of "most divorced women in godfeels". i mean, she absolutely could, but we're not quite there yet. when she and rotrose meet up again, however,
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many people are saying this and many people know this to be real and true in every sense of the terms described
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dave sloppily and clumsily slipping back into the sburb 2009 john + dave dynamic and failing to do anything but put his foot in his mouth because that bro-style mode of coping is so deeply dead and buried. gonna be so silly and painful when dave has to genuinely reckon with the Permanent Change Of State that has occurred
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the dave + june hashing out their shit arc coinciding with the dave gender arc is gonna be delicious to behold i just know it
25/uk/fic writer/perpetual identity crisis. ride or die june egbert loyalist. writing omelette route and its sequels.
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